diff --git a/app/views/notice_dismissal/messages/_13.html.erb b/app/views/notice_dismissal/messages/_13.html.erb index 46993eba..b8dbeb5e 100644 --- a/app/views/notice_dismissal/messages/_13.html.erb +++ b/app/views/notice_dismissal/messages/_13.html.erb @@ -6,30 +6,45 @@
- Welcome to the new Timeline Editor! -
-- This editor is still in beta, so any - <%= link_to 'feedback', 'https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfHHcOpU-CD9EFILPVMd4ZtgWIFkxmzLMW1mdvanJqqLKgMAA/viewform?usp=sf_link' %> - you have is highly appreciated. -
-- You are starting with a blank timeline and can add as many events as you'd like. Each event allows you to - write a customized label for when it happens so you can be as exact or as vague as you'd like, and you can - fully control the ordering of events by clicking the links to move them up, down, to the top, or to the end - of your timeline. -
-- You can also link your existing worldbuilding pages to each event. For example, if you create an event about - <%= example_character_name %> finding a mysterious egg, you can link <%= example_character_name %>'s page - directly, as well as any other pages relevant to that scene (such as an Item page for the egg, the location it's - happening at, or other characters there). Those worldbuilding pages will automatically have a "Timelines" tab - created (visible only to you) that lists all timelines they appear in. -
-- <%= link_to 'Dismiss this message', notice_dismissal_dismiss_path(notice_id: 13) %>. -
++ Welcome to the new Timeline Editor! +
++ This editor is still in beta, so any + <%= link_to 'feedback', 'https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfHHcOpU-CD9EFILPVMd4ZtgWIFkxmzLMW1mdvanJqqLKgMAA/viewform?usp=sf_link' %> + you have is highly appreciated. +
++ You are starting with a blank timeline and can add as many events as you'd like. Each event allows you to + write a customized label for when it happens so you can be as exact or as vague as you'd like, and you can + fully control the ordering of events by clicking the links to move them up, down, to the top, or to the end + of your timeline. +
++ You can also link your existing worldbuilding pages to each event. For example, if you create an event about + <%= example_character_name %> finding a mysterious egg, you can link <%= example_character_name %>'s page + directly, as well as any other pages relevant to that scene (such as an Item page for the egg, the location it's + happening at, or other characters there). Those worldbuilding pages will automatically have a "Timelines" tab + created (visible only to you) that lists all timelines they appear in. +
++ <%= link_to 'Dismiss this message', notice_dismissal_dismiss_path(notice_id: 13) %>. +
+