From 3510d48d68c6bd89a2ac19727e460eedd12a8135 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: p-bo Date: Fri, 18 Nov 2022 14:42:56 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] lowercase instead of uppercase, colon instead of comma There was combination of comma, followed by uppercase article which is not correct. So replaced upper case article with lowercase one and tried also other variants instead of comma between sentences and colon seems to fit best (but may be only subjective perception). Signed-off-by: p-bo --- admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst b/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst index 1bf19fe39..c966f18ae 100644 --- a/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst +++ b/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Upgrade quickstart ------------------ One effective, if unofficial method for keeping Nextcloud current on Linux servers is by configuring -your system to use Nextcloud via a self contained "Snap" package, A technology allowing users to +your system to use Nextcloud via a self contained "Snap" package: a technology allowing users to always have the latest version of an "app". That version from Canonical is quite restrictive. It is not aimed at developers or advanced users From 8eff8fc5765e65fad16fd8484a1d524f851b1ec4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Date: Wed, 14 Dec 2022 22:53:47 +0100 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst Signed-off-by: Daniel --- admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst b/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst index c966f18ae..e30671e59 100644 --- a/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst +++ b/admin_manual/maintenance/package_upgrade.rst @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Upgrade quickstart ------------------ One effective, if unofficial method for keeping Nextcloud current on Linux servers is by configuring -your system to use Nextcloud via a self contained "Snap" package: a technology allowing users to +your system to use Nextcloud via a self-contained "Snap" package: a technology allowing users to always have the latest version of an "app". That version from Canonical is quite restrictive. It is not aimed at developers or advanced users